Sunday, November 15, 2009

The Children Worship Pt. 1

I Wrote a 3 Part Poem inspired by the children at Moorlands Camp which I counsel. Here is Part 1:

Raised Hands

The children lift their arms to heaven
elbows speak
sweaty palms and
fingertips weep
as they release their unwanted past
like steam exiting their skin.

2 comments:

  1. The entire compilation is great. Part 2 is my favourite, VERY DEEP and REAL. I can see it and feel it.
    Keep it coming son!

    Moms

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